It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and solutions?
In this day and age, it is commonly proposed that urban citizens have to cope totally with an abundance of challenges in order to reach the recommended physical activity. While this trend could be triggered by numerous reasons, a number of viable solutions could be adopted to tackle them.
Personally, I suppose certainly that there are purely two primary causes could provoke this heated problem. First and foremost, a large proportion of city dwellers these days seem to lack gravely self-supporting time due to their serious hectic schedule at work; hence, for the sake of relaxation, those people tend to prefer drastically sleeping or surfing social network to doing even some basis workout during the rest of their exhausted days. In addition, the continuous shrinkage of a huge public space in a range of cities with the aim of making way for the erection of several skyscrapers and morden facilities is the second reason behind the severe lack of urban inhabitants’ healthy lifestyle. Owing to this, people who suffer from work-related stress prone to not have sufficient places to simply run or even do some exercises. Ho Chi Minh city perfectly exemplifies this situation on account of the inadequate number of civil parks for citizens.
Therefore, given the aforementioned setbacks, it is highly recommended that a plenty of remedies should be implemented to alleviate the problems. One of the effetive solutions could be organizing gradually marathon competitions in non-working days, which give nuclear family or groups of friends an impetus to partake in to experience not only healthy activities but also the bonding time together. Another measure that authorities may consider is commencing to construct more parks together with multi-purpose sport complex, which aim at easing wholly urban citizens’ physical activities demands.
In conclusion, it is clear to me that the lack of physical exertion in the metropolitan inhabitants’ lifestyle might be caused from many reasons and in order to solve this grave obstacle, we should use these measures which are mentioned in this essay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, while, even so, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29552238806 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93876920605 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644776119403 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0048207753 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.272727273 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4545454545 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132484835028 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448128266707 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02253074867 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687601777516 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351846971197 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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