It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfil both these functions?

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...gnificance to the progress of people and societies. It has been well said that – ...
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...icance to the progress of people and societies. It has been well said that – 'Edu...
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...tion is a companion which, no future can depress, no crime can destroy, no enemy ...
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...ow education can benefit individuals and societies. First of all education shou...
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...ducation can benefit individuals and societies. First of all education should impart...
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...sional knowledge. Such knowledge enables individuals to earn a livelihood. In thi...
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...al knowledge. Such knowledge enables individuals to earn a livelihood. In this way they ...
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...e benefited themselves and also they can look after their families better. This l...
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...nefited themselves and also they can look after their families better. This leads...
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...societies because an educated society is a crime free society. People are self-su...
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...eties because an educated society is a crime free society. People are self-suf...
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... and so do not need to go on the path of crime. Physical education should also...
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... so do not need to go on the path of crime. Physical education should also be p...
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...ll-rounded education. It is a well known fact that healthy individuals would make...
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...ounded education. It is a well known fact that healthy individuals would make a h...
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...hy society. Good health is a basic human need and for the holistic development of...
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...ndividuals, physical education should be incorporated in school curricula. Educ...
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...iduals, physical education should be incorporated in school curricula. Education should...
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...es us adaptive to society. There is less violence and less crime in society is th...
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...s adaptive to society. There is less violence and less crime in society is there if p...
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...ople are educated. They become more open minded and live in harmony with each oth...
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... are educated. They become more open minded and live in harmony with each other. Mo...
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...l science should be a compulsory subject till high school level. Finally, today...
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...ience should be a compulsory subject till high school level. Finally, today env...
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...eed of the hour. All schools should have mandatory lessons on saving the environm...
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...of the hour. All schools should have mandatory lessons on saving the environment. Smal...
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... Small steps can go a long way in saving energy. Energy saved is energy generated...
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...ll steps can go a long way in saving energy. Energy saved is energy generated. We a...
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...have to do away with some luxuries if we want a better tomorrow. In conclusion...
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...tion should have professional, physical, moral and environmental education. After...
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... is not the filling up of a pail but the lighting up of a fire'. A well-roun...
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...n consisting of all the above components would benefit both the individual and th...
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...nsisting of all the above components would benefit both the individual and the soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, so, well, after all, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38364779874 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13132552715 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.043748072 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4347826087 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8260869565 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272667940559 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779836962453 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754261409214 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787575877297 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734404075128 0.056905535591 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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