Talents have been controversial topic for long period of time. While some people believed that talents such sport and music are gifted to some from birth, others argued that there is no barrier can prevent anyone from becoming good at any skill they want.
On the one hand, it is unbelievable fact that there are children born with brilliant skills. In other words, being gifted is something popular throughout history. We can see that through competitions in which children at age 8 or 9 can challenge experts in the fields of sport, music and even at math and science. A real example of that is the player Cristiano Ronaldo who was playing football since he was teenager without being trained. A recent study from the university of Harvard has proven that 35% of the world’s musicians and players were talented in nature.
On the other hand, everything in the world can be acquired by practice. I mean that, there is no limit for humans’ abilities in learning new skills and functioned it as talented. For example, in memory competitions we can see champions who won the first places in the competitions just by practicing strengthen their memory. Moreover, humans’ brains are capable of doing unbelievable skills if they get familiar with them. In a recent report published in the Time of London stated that most of the famous players and musicians learnt their career by self-taught.
In conclusion, although some people think that talents as sport and music are born with people, I believe that practice is more important in which people can master any skill if they put effort on it and practice it for a sufficient time.
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language 67
- Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake regardless of whether the course 82
- The diagram below shows how the instant noodles are manufactured 73
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 60
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... have been controversial topic for long period of time. While some people believed that talent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, i mean, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89605734767 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61397729054 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4904675559 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34610617845 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996054203725 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835150906817 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218053126699 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806131576311 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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