It has been argued that some people think that it is crucial for children to take the responsibility of their life and chose whatever they like while others argued that would result in creating a selfish society. This essay will discuss both views and agree with the first one.
Firstly, give children the chance of making their own decisions will play an improtant role in forming their characters and make them independent. In other words, if a child feel that he or she has the right to decide what to wear and what to eat that will create a sense of independency in them in eraly age. Therefore, they would be able to face the various situations that would meet them later on. Recently study from the University of Harvard proven that most independent individuals have been raised in families thet make them depend on themselves.
On the other hand, allowing children to make their own choices may result in selfishness and self-obsession. If a child used to depend on himself in everyday matters that would make them selfish in that they would put their personal intersts before anyone in every situations. According to a recent poll it has shown that 67% of people who feel self-obsessed were living in an environment that give them the right to decide everything in their life.
In conclusion, although allowing children to make their own decisions has drawbacks, i think its benefits outweigh the downsides and contribute in create strong and independent society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sult in selfishness and self-obsession. If a child used to depend on himself in ev...
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Line 6, column 86, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...make their own decisions has drawbacks, i think its benefits outweigh the downsid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.916 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67219460369 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.9870910856 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.9 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279406497 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111393456111 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959422061197 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176106281934 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495081775187 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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