It has been proposed that citizens should only consume food and drinks products that have been produced in their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In many nations, people are persuaded to intake locally produced food and beverages. While I agree with this notion, given its contribution to economic improvement and the empowered local farmers.
The increase in economic welfare is one of the impacts of people choosing to buy local food and beverages. The more people prefer to consume a domestic meal, the more profitable businesses can generate. This leads to the positive growth of the nation's Gross Domestic Product as more taxes are paid. According to a survey done by Unilever in 2019, the jump of 20% in Korean GDP is contributed by the local Korean food & beverages sectors. This happened a year after the government launched a campaign to love the locally produced cuisine.
In addition, the rise of locally produced meal consumption in a country would support local farmers, decreasing the amount of importing meat and strengthening the value of the nation’s currency. This is because the national demand has been fulfilled entirely by the beef produced by local farmers due to the increase of people choosing to eat the local meal. For instance, research done by the University of Michigan in 2021 stated that Canada had decreased its meat import activity after its persuaded citizen to eat the locally produced meal. The meat’s demand from local farmers has quadrupled and improved their everyday life ever since.
To conclude, leveraging the economy and empowering local farmers are the two positive impacts of people consuming domestic feasts as their preference. Therefore, it is always suggested to serve the highest quality of its products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested serving'.
Suggestion: suggested serving
...eir preference. Therefore, it is always suggested to serve the highest quality of its products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, therefore, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2183908046 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71403837705 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6072824372 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.769230769 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105515160917 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039990419655 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0201403442313 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649568565354 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130053719464 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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