Some people say that all popular TV programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Many people argue that crucial social issue needs to be addressed on tv programs to educate the audience. I agree with the notion as it increases audience awareness and prevents conflict from happening.
Addressing the main social issue on tv for education purposes is necessary to promote awareness, encouraging people to empathize with conflicts. This is because when people see information coming from their favorite tv program, they are engaged more to pay attention, making them relate to the messages conveyed. For instance, the rate of missing persons in Korea decreased drastically in the past couple of years after the highest-grossing series, Beyond Evil, addressed how human trafficking can happen in society. This increased awareness among the majority of people, including police, to investigate this case more thoroughly regarding the missing person. Thus, a program can generate empathy toward social issues.
Conflict prevention is another reason why tv should put main social issues on their programs as their audience could learn the crux problem from a dispute. This encourages them to coexist well with each other, which results in peaceful living conditions in society. For example, as more news channels in Indonesia convey curch demolishment in many areas in Indonesia, which primarily results in anarchy, people are now aware that intolerance and disrespect are the primary reasons for that. After several years of exposing such conflicts on the news, the case decreased by half in the following years as more people learned to accept diversity in society. Hence, bringing social issues to tv lowers the issue from happening in the future.
To conclude, raising the audience’s awareness and conflict prevention are the two primary reasons why major social problems should be aired on tv. If possible, television associations need to impose regulations for the sustainability of the programs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47315436242 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82063099164 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7008765837 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186408738772 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071552771726 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562487247254 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125216395938 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040039553207 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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