Today, there is an increasing number of people moving to cities or towns to live. Outdoor public spaces have proven to serve as versatile places for inhabitants here. It is agreed that it is important for all cities and towns to have large outdoor public spaces such as parks and squares. This will be shown by looking at how these places benefit people’s health and bring money for cities and towns.
Firstly, by providing a place for people to do a wide range of activities, these spaces deprive people of suffering a sedentary lifestyle. For example, Ho Chi Minh city has a large number of parks located in every district, where all sorts of people come here to unwind after intensive work or study hours. In the high-density city, these outdoor public places are the only places where they could immerse themselves with nature for a while. The availability of them also encourages people to go outside rather than isolate themselves at home. Thus, cities and towns need to construct these spaces for the sake of inhabitants.
Secondly, the images of cities or towns could be promoted through the designs of these public spaces. For example, when considering America, people may never forget to mention Times Square as a place where they desire to make a night of it. As a result, being a wonderful impressive attraction means that these places probably contribute to the tourism sector, thereby making profits for the cities and towns. Thus, there is no reason to ignore having these outdoor spaces like this.
In summary, cities or towns having these outdoor public places would benefit from the money stemming from tourists’ budgets and the healthy workforce there. Hence, it is clear why local authorities should allow the construction of outdoor public spaces like parks and squares.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 173, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...tyle. For example, Ho Chi Minh city has a large number of parks located in every district, where ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98338870432 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45926179279 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548172757475 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.563304068 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387421810968 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142456697959 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110418420963 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257122910082 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798138849204 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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