It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment sis necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?
Children must be getting familiar with what is wrong and what is right. Parents usually use different punishment to teach them this distinction. I strongly agree and I think it is important to give the right feedback to your children’s behaviors. In accordance with this fact, the punishment would undoubtedly be a part of your feedback.
Despite of our bad feelings about Punishment, it has many benefits. It could inform children about each function and its effects. Children can easily find out if they do something wrong, they can expect to be fined. For example, I sometimes question myself why the youngest child of each family who has many older siblings prone to be spoiled. In my opinion, there is a high percentage that younger children who usually receive more love and kindness and less punishment, would become spoiled. My uncle is the sixth child of the family, he is by far the youngest. Regarding his recounts about his childhood, he did what he liked. His sisters and only brother who is my father, always support him disregarding his performance and behavior. I think he barely be punished by his family. These days he still needs help even in his personal issues. He had the experience of divorce twice and he fail in his career many times. I think he is not able to discern the right things.
Therefore, I will not ascribe the punishment of children to violence. I believe that punishment has many benefits for children and prepare them for acting in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 757, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ormance and behavior. I think he barely be punished by his family. These days he s...
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Line 4, column 890, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'fails'.
Suggestion: fails
... the experience of divorce twice and he fail in his career many times. I think he is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, still, therefore, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83529411765 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67464205297 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2182200336 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.5 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215769063436 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713223215753 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728971371308 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192158723381 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106969585903 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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