It has become conventional wisdom that educating children from the early stage of age about the notion of good and bad is vitaly important and giving punishment to children when they do wrongs is an essential teaching method. In this essay, i would like to state my agreement and suggest type of punishment that teachers and parents can apply to the yongsters' education about well-behaved behavious.
To commence with, it is undeniable that minor children are inclined to be more obedient than the older ones, hence laying a solid foundation of decent personality would also be easier. Although children's comprehension of dissimilarity between right and wrong may take long time to achieve, the long-term outcomes would be expectable. One of the most common methods of teaching is punishing children for their wrongdoings like misbehaving with their peers or showing a disrespect to the elderly.
However, despite its effectiveness , too fierce punishment would lead to the contrary effect. The detrimental punishments such as using violence or sharply criticizing children's faults would not address the issue and should be avoided. children at young age are vulnerable to hurts, therefore teachers and parents should be more cautious with their punishments on youngsters. Be kind and calmly pointing out children's mistakes and ordering them to find the ways to recorect their faults on their own. As a result, children could learn to distinguish the right and wrong conceptions by themselves.
In short, it is crucial to teaching the understanding of right and wrong to children when they are small. Even though , punishment is a efficient approach to educate children, a moderated and appropriate way of punishing should be highly taken into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, may, so, therefore, well, in short, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3309352518 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99247355196 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611510791367 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9444026733 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271682807022 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100149075014 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490527865965 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163185719876 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358360577177 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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