It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?
The children should learn distinction between right and wrong in their early ages and it is essential to them is a argue among people. In my opinion, parents and teachers have this responsibility to teach children and consider punishment for them.
Punishment is one way which teachers and parents can use it to show valuable of their lessons. Children can perception their mistake by punishment and it is very effective especially in early years. Because children should be touch in the first of their lives and shaped them when are as a child. They can understand the concept of the right and wrong which help them in the future. If there is not any punishment for their mistake, they surely can not understand distinct between the true and false. By the way, the educational system and parents should not allow to use violent punishment such as hunting, willing, and fair them can have negative impact.
Another point is there are many different ways that parent and educational systems can rely them. It is very important parent have good behavior with their children when they are child. Not only should have a friendly relationship with them because of the age gap between parents and children but also the teachers and parents should notice to their students and children because they think their acts are valuable. It can help to gain confidence to do something right. Hence, the role of parent and educational system is very crucial in teaching.
In conclusion, it is necessary to punishment children when do something wrong but not violent punishments that hurt their emotions and soul. Because they have a sensitive age and schools and parents should have right education for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, in conclusion, such as, by the way, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95789473684 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56056222666 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449122807018 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0277681394 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334975611579 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129689270806 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681360714377 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257510605526 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873500129658 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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