It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at early age. punishment is necessary to help them to learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is often argued that penalization is essential for offspring behavior to compromise between good and evil, especially at an early age. This essay completely agree with that statement, also it will address two kind of punishments that we should utilize with our children at early age.
First of all, if our children did something or behaved badly, we should deprive him or her to play their favorite game. Although sometimes the boy being stubborn to comply, he will obey his parents after, also this sanction method will assist the child to differentiate between good and bad actions, therefore if we try to take our child attention to another activity instead of playing, such as helping him to do his homework and makes him spend more time in studying. For instance, in China most of fathers and mothers have hide the video game from their son or daughter and this caused a higher score in their final exams.
Secondly, by allowing them to participate to social work. This way will change their manners whereby they can effect in society by helping people, in addition to that would generate an effective ideas and sense of creativity. For example, In Alexandria city, students went after school timing to field trip, it was a city explore trip, nonetheless there were cleaning the major streets as a penalty of school.
In conclusion, I strongly incline and believe that school and family should apply an effective punishment methodology for their young children as avoiding their lovely games and social work attraction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kind' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kinds'.
Suggestion: kinds
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the fathers') or simply say ''most fathers''.
Suggestion: most of the fathers; most fathers
...ime in studying. For instance, in China most of fathers and mothers have hide the video game fr...
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Line 13, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ovely games and social work attraction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0390625 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56213971838 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66015625 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.7783556194 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.333333333 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.4444444444 7.06120827912 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187286580894 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075591248933 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635475961105 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115699807466 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821619355023 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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