It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
It is often argued that, disciplining offspring at an early age is essential for teaching them the difference between the good and evil. I completely agree with this opinion and I believe that punishment is one of the important methods for better teaching.
First of all, punishment is important factor to protect the child from hurting himself or also making any further damages or problem to the other. Sometimes the child does not know about some dangerous stuffs while using it, however we warn her or him to not use it they will not easily comply with this warning, and again they will use it and maybe that will cause damages to themselves or to the place. For instance, children always have a curiosity about electricity, and therefore in news every day we are hearing about many accidents of electric shock occurred to many offspring.
Secondly, sometimes punishment became motivated to early ages children. When parents are controlling their children behavior by not allowing them to do an entertainments activities for doing an important thing such as eating or studying, that will give them a kind of motivation to act by actively way. For example, my neighbor was preventing his child from playing his favorite game until finishing the homework, and it was motivating him to be active to do it as quick as he can to get his prize.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that easy punishments is a serious for the young children because it protect them from hurting themselves and it gives them a good motivation to be an active in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8984962406 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71541017676 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2162974689 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.777777778 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8888888889 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268925874729 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119786683509 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784597419175 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17723714036 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956461552904 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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