It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Never, everyone who stay behind his/her fair progress. In many parts of life would be necessary to take risks either in professional life or individual life. There are many downsides to taking risks, but I believe that overall, it has a positive effect on people’s lives.
Ome of the main reasons why people would be taking risks is that gain an opportunity to promote themselves. For example, when somebody attended in a construction auction and has risked to win it can help to progress both in individual and professional life and has this chance to show himself/herself in this status. In the past people because lack of inflation and lower price were taking risks more. Furthermore, take risks can help someone experience new things which would be learn from it many things. There are several positive affects in individual life such as satisfaction your wife from you, happiness of your family and etc.
In my opinion, people should be taking risks in many parts of their lives but not mean they take risks without plan and thought. Before every risk not only have you to know all of the aspects of the subject but also have to consider all the consequences. This approach helps people to select the correct option and less the rate of the failure of risk.
In conclusion, taking risks have a number of disadvantages sides, but overall, it has many advantages in personal and professional lives. I would recommend that everyone take risks at least one in his/her life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
Never, everyone who stay behind his/her fair ...
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Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risked winning'.
Suggestion: risked winning
...ended in a construction auction and has risked to win it can help to progress both in individ...
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Line 2, column 628, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...wife from you, happiness of your family and etc. In my opinion, people should be takin...
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Line 2, column 636, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m you, happiness of your family and etc. In my opinion, people should be taking r...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...re every risk not only have you to know all of the aspects of the subject but also have to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85770750988 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66906433998 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569169960474 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8319549297 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5384615385 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376815854496 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131653136237 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092905415939 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234326767039 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656772534057 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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