In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.
Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Most of business try to present a new product to their customers in their advertising and in recent years they have a good tendency toward this issue. In my opinion, it has various positive aspects development.
On the one hand, companies emphasise to develop and produce a new product because it can help them get promoted rapidly compared other manufactures. One of the most important ways which they can show their goods is advertising. Advertising can help them show their products to different people even related corporates. Not only can it make them get more benefit and sales more goods and products but also, in competitive with other companies and businesses they are prior and it can help them to become an international brand.
On the other hand, although it might raise people's expectations that companies should present new version of their products or new product it helps manufactures to be creatively and use innovation methods to built their products. In addition, by providing various goods advertisements can support more taste and cover more people and nations which it is very useful. Manufactures have many rivals in their businesses that by providing new products by high quality of materials and good price can overcome to others. Hence, it has very good positive aspect.
In conclusion, a very good advertising make lots of benefit and positive in different aspects of businesses. They illustrate their new products by advertising and emphsise their new goods because of its profit. If companies don’t use advertising they could not overcome to other rivals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'aspects'' or 'aspect's'?
Suggestion: aspects'; aspect's
... In my opinion, it has various positive aspects development. On the one hand, companie...
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Line 4, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... their new goods because of its profit. If companies don’t use advertising they co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17054263566 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84139987894 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496124031008 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5678522334 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.615384615 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288628031554 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119096369681 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829814764217 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210877088247 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416329222787 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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