It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
There is a saying ‘Without risk you cannot promote neither in your private life nor in professional life’. According to some if a person wants to extend his/her life he/she should take risks. In my opinion, this challenge has more advantages for people who want to change their lives.
On the one hand, although taking risks have more financial and emotional benefits if you pass it successfully it has a lot of dangerous results if you cannot do it. When a person chooses to sell his/her private car because it’s price increased suddenly. He fails in it because he did not that all car’s price increased so he loss his/her car and either should a low model car or don’t buy any car. In addition, it is true in your private life by getting married. It is a big challenge a big risk in the whole of your life. Some marriage lives are successful but unfortunately some else end to divorced. It is important that you choose who for sharing your life with it. Getting risk is a double-edged sword if you fail in your risk loss everything that you have but if you win you can have anything.
On the other hand, at work, and in your career always you want to take risks in any aspect of your work. This makes you get promoted and improve your skills. For example, when the employer suggests an awesome work opportunity that you don’t have any information and experience about and you have doubt accept or not. In such situations, if you are a timid person never accept because you always stay behind your fear and don’t make progress in your professional life. Some else who accept have this chance to show themselves to their boss and employer if so, they might be promoted in their job which is grateful for them. Thus, the risk is so important and has a long-lasting effect on your professional life.
In conclusion, some people do not like to take risks anymore and they want to continue their boring daily lives. Not only is taking risks necessary in both private and professional life because enhances your quality and reveals your abilities but also, you have become a knowledgeable person who has lots of experience and can consult with other people who want to choose this wa
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 24.0651302605 270% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61636828645 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51225110271 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475703324808 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1490852152 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5789473684 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306517196139 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10042318545 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625011109837 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215040631455 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350024210234 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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