Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advertising affect on people who do not need to buy things that they are unnecessary and it is power of advertising that change the people’s mind to provide them. I strongly agree with this issue and believe that.
Many of companies and investments create ads to sell their products. This makes consumers attract to their goods and companies make more benefit. Not only can they be selling their goods, but also it is can to people know their brand and products. Creating ads need to understanding of a wide range of different aspects of knowledge. Adverting with a good concept can change mind’s and increase demands for goods. It is one of the most important powers of advertising that every investment should know it.
There are many places which people can see ads such as TV, social medias, banners, billboards and etc.…. Few years ago, that social media did not have advance, most of ads located either on billboards and banners or TV which people saw then. The social media was advancing rapidly and all of marketing toward these medias. People spend most of their times in it and they can be become to a consumer if they will see a good advertise.
The companies want to more profit so for this either they contract with famous athletes or sport teams to show their brands to people of world. The favorite athletes of people might suggest goods to buying and their fans provide it. This is one of the innovative ways which every investment and company should know it. Although celebrities affect more, brand on the shirt’s sport team is another way to change mind of people. In fact, there are many ways to change the choice of people that one of the most important of them is Advertising.
As a result, people might change their choices to buy things that are unnecessary with see ads in different places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'affects'.
Suggestion: affects
Advertising affect on people who do not need to buy things...
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Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
Advertising affect on people who do not need to buy things th...
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Line 2, column 204, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'canned'.
Suggestion: canned
... be selling their goods, but also it is can to people know their brand and products...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... TV, social medias, banners, billboards and etc.…. Few years ago, that social media did ...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the ads') or simply say ''most ads''.
Suggestion: most of the ads; most ads
...that social media did not have advance, most of ads located either on billboards and banner...
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Line 4, column 341, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ny should know it. Although celebrities affect more, brand on the shirt’s sport team is ano...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73354231975 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44481952713 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495297805643 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2834345798 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101465227573 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364953291166 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047745830581 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676981471728 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619304776944 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.