In today's fast-paced world, people are encouraged to take risks, whether in their professional or personal lives, as it is often seen as a way to achieve success and growth. While there are certainly benefits to taking risks, there are also drawbacks that should be taken into account. In my opinion, however, taking risks and facing challenges bring more benefits that outweigh the potential demerits.
One of the main advantages of taking risks is the potential for personal growth and development. When individuals push themselves out of their comfort zones, they can learn new skills, gain confidence, and become more resilient. For example, an entrepreneur who takes a risk by starting their own business may develop invaluable skills in leadership, communication, and decision-making. Similarly, someone who takes a risk by travelling to a new and unfamiliar place may develop a broader worldview and greater cultural understanding.
On the other hand, taking risks also carries significant disadvantages, such as the possibility of failure and the associated consequences. This can range from financial loss to reputational damage, which can have long-lasting effects on an individual's professional and personal life. For instance, a business owner who takes a risk by investing all their savings in a new venture may lose everything if the venture fails. Similarly, an individual who takes a risk by quitting their job to pursue their passion may face financial hardship and uncertainty.
Despite the potential disadvantages, I believe that the benefits of taking risks outweigh the drawbacks. Without taking risks, people may become complacent, stagnant, and unable to reach their full potential. Furthermore, while failure may be a possible outcome of taking risks, it also provides valuable lessons and opportunities for growth and learning.
In conclusion, while taking risks can be both advantageous and disadvantageous, I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. By taking calculated risks, individuals can develop new skills, gain confidence, and achieve success and growth in their personal and professional lives
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- It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledg 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61656441718 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22472015118 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518404907975 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.8842606704 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.4375 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335510017355 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125784638255 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565586426464 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2103527953 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315290461867 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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