it is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvatages?
Ignoring or accepting risks in both working and individual lives is always a matter put on the table. While some people believe that the availability of risks is not only inevitable but also an apparent edge dividing being successful and failure. From my view, while it is necessary to overcome risks as a needed hurdle in our life, other aspects related to potential threats as the risk’s drawbacks should also be considered thoughtfully, such as the individual’s emotion and motivation.
Staying in the comfort zone seems to be another way of satisfiedly accepting our current abilities, given that there is no afford in more dangerous circumstances which necessitate more potential talents. Embracing the potential problems from customers and learning from them, for instance, offer service staff more strategic ideas to meet their guest’s strict requirements as well as to fix the errors in their projects.
While professional and personal challenges pave the way for success and development, it also entails some certain aspects of life, including emotion and stimulation, if the individual does not possess a healthy mindset and a readiness to wonder risks as a part of their life. It is easy for workers to get a sense of disappointment if they find risks overloading and bothersome, and ultimately giving up comes as the upshot, driven by being detrimental in their motivation which primarily generates their working energy and keeps them enthusiastic.
In conclusion, while the advantages of risks in terms of discovering potential abilities of an individual are numerous, its ability to deplete personal and professional motivation and feeling is also inevitably without a good foredone preparation both physically and mentally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40293040293 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10404495194 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8640903982 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.375 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.125 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.625 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239284323042 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101729643285 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488199029368 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133286584563 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462880854841 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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