In this modern era individual's are looking towards stuffs which make them comfy there by in some town, individual are giving more priority to cars, rather then bicycles. whereas, in other cities cars are replaced by bikes. This essay will delve deeper into matter further and reach to a logical conclusion in the end.
To begin with, there are various factor why people are selecting cars instead of bicycles. Firstly by dint of weather issue biggest obstacle, for instance bicycles are not atmosphere friendly in winters and rainy seasons so that individual opt to buy car. Secondly cars save time because it run much more faster then cycles and in this developing era time plays a vital role as well as it helpful in situations like, any kind of emergency or it help to reach office and school before the time. after that many individual brought the car just for fun along with purpose of show off. for instance nowadays individual are trying to influence the society where they live because they want to be well liked these are few factors why people are choosing cars rather than cycles.
On the other hand, cars has been replaced by bikes for in support of this swap there are some valid reasons why this happen. Firstly due to grid lock many people prefer to switch bike because it become a major concern in the present time almost every citizen has a car and this is the major cause why people getting stuck in traffic jams and getting late for their work in this situation the individual who had bike they can easily run up against these hold up. Secondly the rate of petrol on the peak they are not affordable for those who had not good source of income, bikes consume less fuel and provide good mileage in comparison to cars this is the one of the main reason why individual opt bikes.
In conclusion, in my point of view I reckon riding bikes instead of cars is more indispensable development for society as well as environment it creates less pollution and also consume less fuel thereby it is crucial step towards making nature healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...re giving more priority to cars, rather then bicycles. whereas, in other cities cars...
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Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...priority to cars, rather then bicycles. whereas, in other cities cars are replaced by b...
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Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...priority to cars, rather then bicycles. whereas, in other cities cars are replaced by b...
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Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...rather then bicycles. whereas, in other cities cars are replaced by bikes. This essay ...
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Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'factors'?
Suggestion: factors
... end. To begin with, there are various factor why people are selecting cars instead o...
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Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'issue the biggest'.
Suggestion: issue the biggest
...of bicycles. Firstly by dint of weather issue biggest obstacle, for instance bicycles are not...
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Line 2, column 291, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'runs'?
Suggestion: runs
...car. Secondly cars save time because it run much more faster then cycles and in thi...
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Line 2, column 300, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...ndly cars save time because it run much more faster then cycles and in this developing era ...
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Line 2, column 305, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'faster than'?
Suggestion: faster than
...cars save time because it run much more faster then cycles and in this developing era time ...
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Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ve time because it run much more faster then cycles and in this developing era time ...
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Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ve time because it run much more faster then cycles and in this developing era time ...
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Line 2, column 445, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...tions like, any kind of emergency or it help to reach office and school before the t...
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Line 2, column 494, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...each office and school before the time. after that many individual brought the car ju...
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Line 2, column 505, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun individual seems to be countable; consider using: 'many individuals'.
Suggestion: many individuals
... and school before the time. after that many individual brought the car just for fun along with...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...for fun along with purpose of show off. for instance nowadays individual are trying...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...people prefer to switch bike because it become a major concern in the present time alm...
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[3]
Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'biked'.
Suggestion: biked
...n this situation the individual who had bike they can easily run up against these ho...
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Line 4, column 230, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... fuel thereby it is crucial step towards making nature healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65564738292 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26831360394 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567493112948 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3299179611 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.833333333 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5833333333 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31096199585 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125809172708 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856482282213 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173038397781 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366125591938 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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