It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional culture are incompatible to what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Some people think that the grow of technology will cause the lost of trdition cultures. I partly agree with this statement, while there still some cases culture wasn't affected by advance technology.
On one hand, advance machine replace some of customary jobs were done by human. For example, almost every industry is turning into using machines. Clothes are not sewed by hands anymore. Instead, machines are used due to less time-consuming and products need to be produced on larger scale. In our modern days, traditional way of life is starting to dissappear. As the result, less face to face meetings because people nowadays tend to connect via phone. This affect the relationship beween people and people. Another example is that people also do a lot of shopping online, while in the past, it was usually a great chance for friends to meet and go shopping together. therefore, there are some aspects of cultures that technology can not replace.
On the other hand, traditional culture and technology still co-exist with human effort on preserve traditional culture. Firstly, there are business where traditional work pass down to generation in order to keep the work alive. Secondly, in old days, it is difficult to maintance historical items due to poor circumstances. Nowadays, thanks to advance technology, these items can be conserve better and can be remain for century in good condition.
In conclusion, many traditional work have been lost as result of advances in technology, but human are making effort to preserve and keep it remain for centuries.
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Suggestion: remains
...e making effort to preserve and keep it remain for centuries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13725490196 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72943430236 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619607843137 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8309471954 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.875 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233687166748 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679257814317 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782064027337 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143637857919 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586639696825 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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