It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Not only once had I learned about the syllabus of history at school when I turned on TV or flicked through the pages of a newspaper over the past few months. Whether studying local history is more necessary than history in the world can be a matter of considerable debate. I completely disagree this point of view. In this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.
There are some reasons why schoolchildren should learn the history of their own country. Firstly, they must be more aware of understanding how earlier generations fought and sacrificed for the freedom of the country. Therefore, they will respect their life and liberty. Secondly, students can appreciate how local tradition developed through thousands of years. As a result, For example, Hung King commemoration based on the legend of ancient who construct and develop Au Lac nation and it is held annually in my country
Although it is important for students to study local history, people can not underestimate the history in the world. On the one hand, if people exposed with to explore the events which took place in the ethnic group, they can develop knowledge and understand the custom and culture in the other countries. For instance, residents in the host country will more welcome when they settle into a new country in order to live or work. On the other hand, it is possible that students know how historical events of a nation influence local history, such as the end colonialism, have shaped contemporary society.
All thing considered, although it may be the belief of many that it is important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. It is my firm conviction that schools must teach local, national, world history. However, the situation can be different context and people should not take the position that is extreme.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f a newspaper over the past few months. Whether studying local history is more necessar...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on and it is held annually in my country Although it is important for students to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97402597403 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73812004848 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564935064935 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.566731953 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.133333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312960634046 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965051129076 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105354509246 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194362825232 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736016296055 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.