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It must be admitted that in many countries around the world there are several issues at school in behaviors of children. This essay will discuss the main reasons of problem and then describe the possible effects of the issue.
In my personally speaking, the foremost causes of children behavior are teachers are not attentive for the students and children are disturbing by surfing social media. Today more and more teachers are not interested in the knowledge of students and they do not do their work with and consideration. This results in children bad behavior. Moreover, the problem is accentuated by the loosing people time on the internet, where students loosing much time there. Many people proclaim that high percentage of children are waste their time on the social media, as a result of it they are not well educated.
The possible effects of this problem include there are a big number of murder and crimes, as a result of children bad behavior. For instance, about 40% of crimes done by children, which are don’t study at school and doing offenses. Moreover, they don’t have bright future, because of their behavior. As a result of it in many countries around the world a bid percentage is formed by children. And the majority of people are working on a blue market.
In conclusion, bad behavior is a big problem that affects a lot of people nowadays. It is mainly caused that teachers have law attention to children and interrupting by social media. Main affects that they are ruining their future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8992248062 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60405124136 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472868217054 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1917919723 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178000899093 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650847556628 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100173308984 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14166950846 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120648447549 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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