Some people believe that graduates of middle school have to continue studing at higher education school.But another types of people's think on the contrary.
Some people believe that graduates of middle school have to continue studing at higher education school.But another types of people's think on the contrary.
On the one hand,pupil's do not have a clear undestaining correct meaning of the job.In a small schooling they are not in a strong position to undertake early employment.Anoyher negative side is loosing young people's precious time.For example,if they would work before entering university,they can forget about education.And it would hard to undestand or remember words,senteces and skills which they got.The side effect of disconnecting from schooling might not be significant in the first several years,but with age,it will surely disadvantage them a lot.Before long,dissapointed from early employment,young people might resolve,young people might resolve to resume study.But after that,it can suitable for learnong any more.
On the other hand,starting work career before entering to higher education school would be able to broad thinking.It can teach to person suppose to mind think more and more modern.And believe living alike adults.As a result of being unemployed,younge people can plan how to earn cash for future.For instance,it can help to school boys or girls have not difficulties in forth on the cash.But anyway,continuing study is better choice than work in a school years.
In conclusion,opinion of the first type people is oveecome with many disadvantages of working in a school years.And there we can not see much advantages of working before entering to university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58723404255 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46181655122 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629787234043 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 229.454243805 49.4020404114 464% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 328.25 106.682146367 308% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.75 20.7667163134 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.25 7.06120827912 414% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365524369082 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.329748848945 0.084324248473 391% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.317958803831 0.0667982634062 476% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329748848945 0.151304729494 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.317958803831 0.056905535591 559% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.3 13.0946893788 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.15 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.03 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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