It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct(e.g. Dinosaurs, dodos,..). There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, animal species are gradually dying out naturally, for this reason, some people argue that people do not need to protect wild animals. From my point of view, I completely disagree with this notion and this essay will give some reasons for my opinion.
To begin with, human activities nowadays have detrimental impacts on wildlife. Due to deforestation with an aim to construct roads and exploit wood, wild species are more likely to become homeless. As a result, these animals may gradually vanish and be on the verge of extinction. For example, logging to expand agriculture in Vietnam has damaged the habitat of some species such as cobra and birds. In addition to poaching many wild animals in the red list like Koala and Panda held in captivity to sell their body parts in black market leads to the disappearance of rare species.
Some animal species play an important role in boosting agriculture. An example can be seen as bees and butterflies make a great contribution to pollination among plants. Moreover, every animal also helps maintain the balance of the ecosystem as well as biodiversity. Therefore, the government should raise people’s awareness about the importance of animal species and introduce policies and regulations to conserve them, especially endangered species. Furthermore, local authorities also need to restrict industrial and agricultural activities which negatively affect wildlife.
In short, every animal species is important in human life and ecosystem balance so the government should have drastic policies to protect wild animals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in short, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36546184739 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85292114259 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630522088353 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7487948239 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213909615585 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681541784316 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639302221883 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133085487864 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719198633216 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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