It is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary life, furnishing a large number of millennials with tertiary education has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this mainstream triggers some detrimental implications, its benefits will be far more significant.
Offering teenagers compelling opportunities to approach higher education system brings dazzling advantages. First, since university is an academic learning environment, it helps students enrich their specialized knowledge. In fact, some jobs require a deeper understanding of the fundamental theories and the nature of subjects. Therefore, the more likely teenagers are to step into universities, the higher chances they have for decent jobs and handsome salaries. Second, by taking part in university life, youngsters are able to boost their skills such as problem-solving, discussion and teamwork. Simultaneously, their soft skills such as communicative, logical,... are also significantly enhanced , which paves the way for them in workplace later on.
That something is welcomed is reinforced by more supporting evidences below. Third, in order to advance our intellect, more and more young people should attend university once in their lifetime. Governments should adopt such holistic approaches to tackle the high unemployment rates. For example, American local authorities are inclined to offer more scholarships for international students and widen the scope of studying abroad, which helps the students get exposed to a better education system. Last but not least, it is of paramount importance for young people to improve their social network with teachers and friends. By doing so, they are inclined to improve necessary communication and teamwork skills, which later on will contribute to the job network’s success..
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is of utmost importance of every country to encourage millennials to maintain their education path to university. Only when concerted endeavors are made in terms of education can the prospect of an educated society be visible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, third, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83168316832 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23426700092 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650165016502 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7036751151 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.941176471 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10945933114 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030466879612 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316384285537 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0525227948384 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474778090586 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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