It is not rude for Vietnamese people to ask personal questions of their counterparts To what extent do you agree or disagree

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It is not rude for Vietnamese people to ask personal questions of their counterparts. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the business world, most Vietnamese people believe that the curiosity of knowing private information about their counterparts is acceptable. I strongly disagree with this common opinion for two reasons.
First and foremost, those who are continuously asked too much about their private information tend to become weary of the questions. In psychological research, most people have the fear for reputation that someone will utilize their personal data against them by finding errors in their statistics, which leads to them avoiding responding to private questions. Therefore, the act of inquiring about sensitive information should be diminished in the business world because this type of information belongs to their privacy.
Second, the main accountability of theirs is to cooperate and had commerce promoted, which means these questions have no relation to their business. The more excessively they are inquired, the fewer opportunities they agree to sign contracts. In fact, It is a common belief that those who inquire too much about other private information are unreliable although they presume not. Thus, it is impolite for a person to ask personal questions of their counterparts.
In conclusion, while most Vietnamese people believe that asking about sensitive information in the business world is not rude, it is extremely impolite. People should avoid inquiring about this type of question as much as possible.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5296803653 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95379089175 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570776255708 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2254225295 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.090909091 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268336032932 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108963504139 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834268988083 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171763280195 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025556905307 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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