In this modern era, it is more approachable for people to go to distant areas for various purposes. It leads to many advantages and disadvantages that affect largely on our daily life.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that being able to travel to remote natural environment can bring us much invaluable experiences and also many unforgettable memories in our whole life. Moving to vast space covered by nature and less suffered from human beings's activities, it is not only an ideal place for people to relax, release the stress from workplaces, etc... but also a meaningful way to have more knowledge about the world around us and to have a closer sight into the nature. Besides, people can take advantage of discovering many unexplored areas, especially the scientists. For instance, science field require a specific work environment to conduct many experiments, so scientists can come up with many inventions that benefits the human's life. Moreover, a new space, a new environment always contain many mysterious things that beings have still not know yet. Therefore, it is a good opportunity to explore more about this Earth- about where we are all living in.
On the other hand, it is admittable that tourism industry has serious effects on our environments. Travelling by transportations consumes large amount of fossil fuels of the Earth, and at the same time, it also releases a lot of exhaust fumes into the environment, which intensely contaminate the quality of the air. If we go to many remote spots, it will need more fuel and then, the environments will become more and more polluted. Moreover, many researches and experiments conducted by scientists also have negative impacts on our environment. Such as, we need to have a place for these stuffs, so many buildings will be built up, which can lead to the land destruction, and maybe a large amount of trees can be cut down, bring to the shortage of habitat of animals.
To conclude, taking advantage of the novelty of many faraway lands can bring us both pros and cons. Individuals should utilize it wisely and reasonably to provoke its wonderful benefits, and also decrease its drawbacks for a stable development of human beings in this modern age.
- It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment such as the South Pole What are advantages and disadvantages of this development 84
- Some people believe that one of the best ways to solve environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people believe that one of the best ways to solve environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 747, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
... with many inventions that benefits the humans life. Moreover, a new space, a new envi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, as for, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96782841823 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83621531798 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573726541555 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0983300689 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8125 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3125 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16230491904 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514517143027 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337185581803 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107457819094 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289556399102 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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