It is true that the number of students who pursue the science sector is becoming inadequate in a lot of countries in the world nowadays. The essay below will analyze some explanations for this situation as well as its influence on society.
There are two primary reasons why most students do not choose this field. First, these subjects are usually more difficult and demanding, which requires students to put much effort into their studies. For example, my friend who is doing a course in Biology said that he has to perform too many experiments and complete numerous different projects, which would make him not have any free time. As a result, science subjects seem to be less attractive to students compared to economics or business-related subjects. Secondly, employment opportunities in this particular field are limited and extremely competitive. Therefore, learners are less likely to decide to select these majors, instead, they tend to choose other subjects which allow them to find jobs more easily.
A shortage of learners in science fields can result in some negative effects. The first impact is the imbalance between the number of students who study science and other majors. More specifically, there are very few students studying science, while the remaining majors such as engineering or economics tend to be the opposite. This leads to an imbalance in the future workforce. In addition, the lack of human resources in this field will affect greatly the development of each country. Because there is not enough force to conduct thorough scientific research. This might contribute to reducing the country's ability to develop science and technology.
In conclusion, the shortage of students choosing science subjects is caused by several factors, and this problem might bring about serious impacts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'numerous'.
Suggestion: numerous
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...reatly the development of each country. Because there is not enough force to conduct th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29655172414 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77061186939 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624137931034 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8041547868 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237531300252 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703571621273 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494485562892 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14338421732 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274216203464 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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