It is observed that most government pay lot of money for art project for instance , there are more and more paintings and sculpture seen in public places. Some people think that it is wrong and government should spend money on other important thing .
It is a topic of debate that higher authorities is spending lot of money on art . In public places there are many sculpture paintings can be seen , for instance ; However , it is believed by other masses that despite pay expenditure on art government should spend money on other imparative things. I partially agree with this notion and money should be spent equally on art and other important things such as education .
One the one hand, there are an ample number of reasons why authorities should spent capital on art and one of them is employment. What i mean to say is that person who has great skills of hand paintings they can get a job to make pictures in public places and can earn higher. As a result , unemployment will eliminate. Moreover, sculpture pictures enhance the beauty of nation. Many tourist visited every day in nation and when they see great photos on places they influence from them and then they tell to their friends .
On the other hands, there are plethora of factors why government pay attention towards other sectors and one of them is eliminated the poverty in country. In other words, government should open schools for priviller families who can not afford children's' school fee . One day that children will get jobs and get good salary package. Therefor, in future there will not any poor. Furthermore, government should pay money stadiums to promote sports for better health. Nowadays, obesity is common and being overweight can cause a number of health problems, which lead to heart problem and diabetes and if every town has a sport stadium people can do workout there and fight against overweight.
In conclusion, although sculpture paintings are important for country, government should spent money on other sectors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99659863946 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58207878028 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1304596938 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33230610634 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113942572821 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125029139722 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246621280659 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14535457279 0.056905535591 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.