Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their daily lives. What are these problems? Do you think the government should encourage people to move to smaller towns?
In this present scenario,devolved cities give to people many useful facilities such as education and employment . Therefore, individuals attract towards urban areas .They face many difficulties in their everyday life when they live their which will be discuss in upcoming paragraphs. In my point of view authorities must be motivate towards smaller town .
On the one hand, there are an ample number of problems they face in large cities and first and formest is health implication. In other words, nowadays, traffic has become a headache of cities because it leads a lot of health diseases , lung ,skin ,mental, any many more. Moreover, another problems about cities which become hard for masses to stay in cities is expensive. There are water bill, gas bill , electricity bills, are must be paid in every month which some time their out of range . As a result , they have to leave the house.
On the other hand , to encouraged to masses to move in smaller towns , health, work related should be introduced and so people have no go to larger cities for this things. To add on , in towns a laws should make a gardens and stadiums which influence the pupils to live in there.
In conclusion, health related problems and more out of budget make developed cities to difficult to live in . For influence people towards small towns government make stadiums and give some facilities in towns which become to towns better to stay there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95435684647 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63302308959 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56846473029 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6413461524 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299377390865 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098803441167 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509041010512 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179743811167 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020247582056 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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