It is often said that crime is a result of societal conditions and poverty, not individual character. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often said that crime is a result of societal conditions and poverty, not individual character. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a debate about whether social problems and poverty or inborn characteristics cause criminal issues. While I agree partly with the view that crime problems are undeniable consequences of societal conditions and poverty, I still believe that criminal is resulted from a bad person’s nature.
On the one hand, the reason reinforcing my opinion that criminal issues are attributable to individual character is that a person who is cruel easily commits a crime. In other words, a small child who always bullies friends is likely to commit an offense. For example, an article indicates that most people who commit murder often used to abuse other girls or boys at school. Also, bad characteristics including laziness or selfishness are considered as main culprits building up offenders. The fact of the matter is that numerous lazy people instead of finding jobs to earn money choose to steal from others, thus, criminal issues could worsen seriously in an uncontrolled way.
On the other hand, I advocate that living conditions and poverty are main reasons behind a crime owing to an increase in the unemployment rate. More specifically, in this day and age, an array of people are pushed to work illegally to make ends meet for members in their families. For instance, a person without enough money or even a job to make money so as to pay for medicine or housing rent; always tends to be a stealer or even resorts to smuggling drugs as a means to earn a living regardless of laws. As a consequence, there is a dramatic increase in the number of offenders every day. This way, it can threaten the quality of people’s life and the security of a country.
In conclusion, I think people living in poor conditions or being born with innate negative nature are likely to become criminals.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 655, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an uncontrolled way" with adverb for "uncontrolled"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... criminal issues could worsen seriously in an uncontrolled way. On the other hand, I advocate that li...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...nough money or even a job to make money so as to pay for medicine or housing rent; alway...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88787878788 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80168026457 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569696969697 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9252834006 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.533333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257905018301 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960637179609 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156382262896 0.0667982634062 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21033735315 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.281683653639 0.056905535591 495% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 655, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an uncontrolled way" with adverb for "uncontrolled"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... criminal issues could worsen seriously in an uncontrolled way. On the other hand, I advocate that li...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...nough money or even a job to make money so as to pay for medicine or housing rent; alway...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88787878788 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80168026457 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569696969697 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9252834006 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.533333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257905018301 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960637179609 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156382262896 0.0667982634062 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21033735315 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.281683653639 0.056905535591 495% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.