People have different views about whether students should be taught to behave well in addition to academic education from schools. From the point where I stand, I completely agree with this idea.
A school is a place where students spend a lot of time with their teachers and classmates, therefore students’ attitudes and manners could be impacted from the surrounding. In light of this situation, teachers in school should play a role in guiding students to form good manners, including children being taught to share their toys in kindergartens to the point that teenagers learning to express their ideas in a polite way in group discussions, all which are designed to make students properly functioning adults. In addition, students tend to trust in their teachers and thus they are willing to imitate teachers’ behaviour, so teachers themselves should also set role models for students. By conducting this, young people will gradually get to understand bad and good behaviour.
Through education, students would develop a sound moral value system so that they would have the ability to differentiate the right from the wrong. As there are many misbehaviours promoted in the media and in the society, this moral awareness would prevent them from being misled if they are exposed to that information, which results in a lower rate of juvenile delinquency and contributing to a stable society.
On the other hand, some educationalists are in favour of imparting some important virtues and moral values into students, motivating the next generation to make good use of knowledge to contribute positively to their future employers and the whole society. Students who are conscious of social responsibilities are more likely to design safe products which benefit consumers if they work as engineers for manufacturing sector in the future. Students who do not have a moral compass cannot achieve success, even though they perform well at school.
In conclusion, good manners help people become socially acceptable citizens, and without good manners, one can not become successful in their careers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a polite way" with adverb for "polite"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...enagers learning to express their ideas in a polite way in group discussions, all which are des...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34431137725 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93075236162 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595808383234 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8390724538 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.75 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0838425054188 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336118634225 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0196457770042 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0476623208117 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170116699582 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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