It's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is argued that those who want to succeed in a certain field such as art and sport must have natural talent. But others believe that any youngster may be taught to be a good sport or artist. In my opinion, I believe that child can become a successful sportsperson or an artist with training.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people think that only natural talent is essential for success. Firstly, when they have natural abilities, they will pressure by practicing and learning, because they can easily understand a certain field. For example, a child when born with natural soccer skills, so they don't need to practice or learn how to play soccer but still understands how to play football and already plays well. Secondly, having a natural talent in a certain field, they will have more opportunities to choose their favorite works and they can earn high salaries thanks to the natural skills. Finally, they may not need to do the hard work, but still, have salaries.
On the other hand, I believe that if the child has well-educated and learns and practices more, they can still succeed. To begin with, most successful people say that the secret of their achievement is hard work and practice more and they use their hard to be successful instead of use their natural talents. Furthermore, although some people have natural abilities at the early age, but they still trained. For example, Ronaldo who is the famous soccer player, he has trained at the age of 6, although he has a natural talent for football at a yough age.
In conclusion, it is true that children with some natural talent can achieve success easily without much effort. However, it seems to me that those without natural ability can become a successful sportsman or an artist by traning every day.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78387096774 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47430289534 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529032258065 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5821125665 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.928571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7142857143 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26496465151 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109815562051 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853913436523 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207173224562 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133493877818 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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