It's important for people to take risks. Both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
There is a widely held view that everyone should live life on the edge, as it will benefit both their career path and their private lives rather than ruin/despoil/decimate them. From my viewpoint, I strongly agree with this statement due to the development, which risks may bring about to every individual.
First of all, taking risks in the workplace will bring employees a promising career, as they can make use of chances to prove their capabilities. Take the appearance of the light bulb into account, since thousand years ago, it would be unrealistic if someone says that human being can exploit another source of light rather than sunlight or candles. But the bet that Thomas Edison laid when inventing the very first light bulb had been proven is one of the most worth-taking risks ever, and his career then soon took off. Consequently, taking risks equals to taking chances, and by doing that, everyone can quickly climb their career ladder.
In terms of personal lives, risks improve people from all walks of life due to the experience and knowledge they expose everyone to. Basically, individuals are taking risks every day, from choosing to drive on a new route to practicing new skills. Of course, people may get lost while going on an unfamiliar journey, or their fingers may be hurt in the first time playing guitar. Nonetheless, if those risk takers choose to stay within their comfort zones, they will never be able to witness the spectacular view they may drive through, or deeply feel the beauty of songs played by them.
On the whole, although one may argue that taking risks has plenty of disadvantages, with careful preparation, I believe that such drawbacks can be curbed. As a result, every risk taker can make use of the opportunities, which come together with risks, to gain practical experience and grow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, nonetheless, so, then, while, of course, as a result, first of all, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94193548387 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66802861509 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616129032258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.1367254728 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29270088056 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107915439207 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653042054563 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166653666372 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422901263809 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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