Being considering the workers as the main asset or backbone of any company, it is vital to take care of them as well as keep them happy. My essay will brief about how to better take care of them by companies in future.
Presently, most of the organizations have become so selfish that they are neglecting their main strength of the company. To better take care of their workers or employees organization should take the following steps in future. First of all, all workers or employees should be treat as a family member as well as take care. Secondly, to make the family member happy and motivational some percentage of annual profit should be distributed among the workers as an annual bonus.
Furthermore, To take better care of them, company owners should implement the best safety practice among the staff to minimize as well as avoid the accident rate in the industries. For instance, According to a survey of India report, there is an increase in five percent enhance in an industrial accident from the year 2012 to 2013. Lastly, a happy and healthy environment must be created among the workers or employees to make them stress-free.
In my opinion, both employees and company are vice-versa of each other. More they are happy with each other more will be profit. Consequently, taking care of each other will be beneficial for both. To explain, one of the Surat diamond merchant gifted the flats to their workers, as a result, company profit margin had been doubled compared to the last year.
In a nutshell, it is crystal clear that more happy will be workers helps to generate more profit for the company. So companies should take care of their asset well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79584775087 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57587764694 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501730103806 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5951061952 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302149854274 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111117644515 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654629516068 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179952579506 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674361558862 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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