It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, an increasing number of people are concerned about the fact that the reduction of population in developed countries is considered as the consequence of the low rate of marriage. I completely agree with the idea that it is better for people under the age of 30 to marry, which brings benefits to personal life and society.
First, it goes without saying that establishing a family before 30 years old is reasonable. In other words, this is definitely the golden time for giving birth. According to a recent survey taken place in the University of Oxford, the elder of women have pregnant, the higher proportion of down syndrome for their offsprings. In addition, having a family in this age group would raise the desire to mature and develop their careers in order to be the best pattern for their children. Those responsible people, hence, will try their best to enhance their living standards, which significantly boost the movement of the whole country.
That is not to say that there are not any benefits to marry after this socially defined time. This means that people, by achieving some difficult goals and following elaborated plans, are enabled to focus on their success that will allow them to access a highly-paid position. Moreover, individuals are constantly challenging society that they rarely follow a set pattern. Take today's women as a prime example, they are a substantial part of the workforce and they can be extremely focused on their professional development. As a consequence, they only get married once they are more stable in their jobs.
In conclusion, I would argue that the advantages of getting married before 30 years old are appealing including the maturity of attitude and supporting the country's development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02730375427 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78831444315 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600682593857 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.751306538 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.307692308 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26171079102 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851754664093 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394566985775 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13763301152 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179760372143 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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