While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Although it is commonly believed that in today's era one of the biggest threat to weather change is global warming, other people think that deforestation has severe effect around the globe. From my perspective, deforestation should be considered first as it is one of the main reasons of global warming.
On the one hand, it is considered by some that over-exploitation of forests cause a more tremendous impact on our world and I agree. In other words, it is the rapid upsurge in population of many countries that cause the elimination of forests. Deforestation, as a consequence, generate numerous problems such as harming the environment, causing smog or heat wave. According to recent research taken place in the University of Oxford, many metropolitan cities in the world recently tackle massive hotness upsurge and due to this phenomenon, various individuals may lost their precious lives in the future. In addition, fauna and flora, with the exacerbation of human activities, may lose a wide spectrum of habitats, which may deteriorate the condition of nature and eventually descend biodiversity. Therefore, animals that suffer from deforestation must seek other habitats for survival.
On the other hand, it is often thought that global warming is the most urgent problem that we face at the moment. This means that the world's temperature is rising rapidly resulting various calamities such as melting polar ice, which lead to sea level rise and flood. The upsurge of water level in the sea, for instance, pose a threat to the population dwelling in the coastal areas. Moreover, due to drought and desertification as the temperature surge, several species suffer from starvation and become extinct.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I think that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our Earth as it might endanger the lives of fauna and flora at greater cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...face at the moment. This means that the worlds temperature is rising rapidly resulting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17857142857 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01037413295 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9301069512 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.692307692 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269700172233 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832795763258 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793645543286 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148907652902 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235194366485 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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