It is advised by few that all young individuals must try to spend a period of unpaid work helping people in the communities. I strongly agree with this statement as it is benefitial for the nation and they can use their unpaid hours for a good cause rather than working.
There are so many communities available which are looking for volunteers and they are even willing to pay the volunteers. As the time spent for unpaid work is useless, It could be contributed to the betterment for these communities. Young individuals can help old people in old age homes. It has been proved by the researchers that the interaction between young and adults increases the lifespan of the old people which not only helps the communities but the old people as well.
The youth can also learn so many skills like communication and respect for poor and handicap people. The is so much that young people can do to resolve the issue of poverty. As in countries like india, poverty has been seen on the roads. young people should help the poor people living on the roadside by providing then clothes, food and shelter.
To conclude, I extremely believe that young people should spend their upaid hours of work for the communities and helping poors as it not only benefits them but the nation as well.
- There are many ways to find a job newspaper advertisements Internet job search Web sites and personal recommendations What do you think is the best way to find a job Why Give reasons or examples to support your opinion 56
- The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club about the club s activities facilities and opening hours Summarise the information 73
- It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people 56
- The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years
- The chart below shows the number of students from four different countries applying to a European university Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Young
...ia, poverty has been seen on the roads. young people should help the poor people livi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70796460177 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54088658314 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526548672566 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7455891667 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7272727273 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370594739252 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145934377728 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118688187545 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235036186124 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448445972705 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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