The statement says that shopping patterns of individuals vary more on their age group over other factors. Because I believe that other factors such as peer pressure and the desire to be accepted by the society are the utmost cause of certain habits, i radically disagree with this premise.
People who are in their teenage years feel the need to look fashionable and to stand out in the crowd, which leads them to bad shopping habits. Age groups matter a lot when it comes to social media and other influences. People who are in their 30s or 40s, do not really care about their clothing styles as they are very busy in their hactic schedule and other financial problems.
Moving towards social media, the biggest threat to our society. Youngsters spend most of the time of a day on social networking sites which makes them more depressed and more anxious. Freelancer models set an image for them to follow which makes them more worried about both their dressing sence and body image. Adoloscents themselves are the prominent cause of their bad shopping habit for instance, if a celebrity is wearing a gucci bag, they would want to buy it too because they feel like they have to keep up with the trends.
I am not in the favour of the statement that people have bad shopping habits because of their age groups but instead it is more influenced by other reasons which have been mentioned above.
To conclude, even though the age group is the root cause of the problem but other factors should not be ignored.
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what should i do to improve bands my goal is band 7.5 or 8
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68913857678 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29009603092 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8956776085 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.818181818 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284025234343 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106470328715 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646814093158 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167922044323 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363217947498 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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