It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car, a television and a fridge Do disadvantages of this development for society outweigh the advantage?
It is widely deemed that every materialistic thing such as a car, refrigerator and television. Most of these are commonly essential products found in everyone's house. But what is the benefit of thise items and what are it's a drawback? Will discuss both the side in details.
Let's commence with the benefits of having these items to human beings. Firstly, having a personal car provide convenient and speed travelling. Secondly, the fridge is highly useful for storing perishable food items and keep them fresh for a long time. Moreover, the refrigerator provides proper store tempting product such as sweets, ice cream, fruits and vegetables and many more. lastly, television is succour to gain knowledge like providing information and entertainment as well as provide global and local news and in thise corona pandemic television succour a lot to patronising people for health consult.
On other hand, there is also a drawback of owning such items. First of all, A growing number of cars on roads can cause traffic congestion. Moreover, the combustion of fuels can create air pollution. Even the dominant use of fridge is also considered of depletion of dozen layer. Which can reduce protection from ultraviolet rays. Last but not least, many children imitate the violence and various stunts shown on television. Children observation skills are very clever and when they are alone at home at that time they striving to do which was they saw.
I recapitulation that every item has there owned pros and cons like the pros of comfortable travelling, good storage of food and the other hand such as traffic problems, air pollution. But some are an essential product which need has indeed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Most
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Suggestion: But
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...considered of depletion of dozen layer. Which can reduce protection from ultraviolet ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09712230216 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72227069278 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63309352518 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4742620328 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7222222222 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117495779037 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029927264636 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035369237277 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571829018054 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048959975149 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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