It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car, a television and a fridge. Do the disadvantages of this development for society outweigh the advantages?
it goes without saying that nowadays everyone wants to have a car for comfort travelling and for entertainment to has a television and a fridge for protect their food and water .having these all things seem to be more advantageous than disadvantageous.
On the one hand , if we look its merits. these are obvious and evident. To begin with, purchasing these important things depend upon the pocket money of the people. if they want buy them they can and live a comfortable life such as with a car they can travel everywhere anytime.they will not depend on public transfort.Apart from that with the help of television they may entertain by self .and they may watch programmes which they like. though television needs electricity to operate,but now it available everywhere almost so they can get it. Besides this, freeze also a appliance which is used for different purposes such as to cold food, fruits, vegetables and other things. if anyone buys it to get fresh things , he can.it just totally depends upon the budget of person.
On the other hand, if we consider its demerits. they may unpredictable and predictable.To start with, if everyone drives car , certainly traffic jams will increase on the roads. it will not only lead to congestion but also tend to increase the amount of pollution in the world. What is more, television and freeze are considered to be expensive things so it may lead expenses of consumer.even though these will provide better life but it will consume lots of amount electricity which may rise pressure of electricity generate industry.
In conclusion, i frimly beleive that if everyone has these things they would increase problems through out the world
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, may, so, apart from, as to, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, to start with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98936170213 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86003872064 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.0944308664 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136163912992 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424500501077 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719768800878 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104078165712 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996790335463 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.