These days,it is said that pupils should study hard at school instead of wasting time on learning in the Internet. I completely disagree with this statement on account of two following reasons.
Primarily, students' self-studying can be set up with high technology,speciafically the Internet. It becomes a great assistant of children that provides them ample online courses with exersies and documents to review old lessons or gain extra knowledge. Besides, school-age kids have oppoturnites to access to abundant source of information,leading to the Internet undeniably upgrades pupils' horizon and establish a vital tool for educating by their own.
Secondly, it is a bridge connecting gifted students around the country or even the world. By posting their questions through some webs or apps, children can be confused with different opinion of answers. Whereby,a number of well-being pupuils will assist them to find out the most appropriate solutions. Consequently,they not only earn more knowledge but also broaden their relationship.
In conclusion,spending time to research education in the Internet is more beneficial then we imagine. From my perspective, kids should balance time with studying hard at school and detecting extra knowledge at home to enhance their horizon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63402061856 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4694397869 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70618556701 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6946538859 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3636363636 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240211803136 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835524279857 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117860271149 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166461273821 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125838307185 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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