For the time being, it is undeniable that the academic standard can not be develped withouy the role of teachers. In this essay, I totally agree that teachers make a vital contribution to national edication.This essay will show that not only are teachers effective educators but they also believable motivators.
Firstly, all tutors are experienced people.Through well-structured lessons with explainations and academic demonstrations, students have opportunities to acquire necessary knowlegde to provide them a deeper insight into an abundance of horizon and gain knowlegde to put into practice.The most principal example of it may be that some basic life skills teached at school will assist kids to solve the issues about learning or relationships.
Secondly, children need sympathic motivators to support them along the long anf tense process of learning because they easily get bored and drained.Teachers will inspire and motivate pupils to reach their full potential, overcoming making responsible choices to become good citizens in the society.For instance, children often have troubles in family or friend problems so that emotional support is essential.
In conclusion,there is no denying that the education industry can be enhanced thanks to the efforts of teachers,who are thought to be great tutors and significant motivators for teenagers.
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- Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success at school Do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree with this statement Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay 71
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68472906404 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30685365989 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709359605911 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.062138995 49.4020404114 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.8 106.682146367 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.6 20.7667163134 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.2 7.06120827912 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.096830821584 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540670425396 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609046272527 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0565461325775 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615779590856 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 13.0946893788 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.3 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.55 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.61 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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