For the tim being, it is undeniable that tourism has been developing to become one of the most significant earning for a country. This following essay will show you the advantages and disadvantages of this argument.
The main benefit tourism brings to the nation is boost in country's economy due to increased spending in certain aspects. Tourists require service while travelling such as accommodation, guides, entertaining activities,etc that leads to the increase in national GDP. It helps local people to have opportunies to get jobs with high salary. Moreover, tourism assists the local to grab a chance to show itself off, make a good impression on foreign tourists to raise its profile to the world.
Beside such instrumental merits, there is a drawback that this trend can cause is environmental destruction. These days, the tourists tend to have an overconsumption of food, drink,etc. As a result of it, the attractions' visual will be ruined. Specifically, some well-known beaches in Vietnam have been facing up to the waste from travelers that makes the water more polluted.
Despite this mentioned drawback, it seems to me that tourism has made a more positive contribution to governmental income. If the government, local communites with travelers aware of maintaining the natural beauty and take actions to protect,we can solve this problem.
On balance, the fact that the boost of national revenue and image-promoting should to be developed more, while the spoil of natural environment must be deleted. Personally, the positive sides outweigh the negative one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.328 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08311530761 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3050540692 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172585111839 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499804804762 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453612189998 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891875525586 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529268064722 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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