These days world , it is an essential fact that studying on the Internet is as worthwhile as studying in the class, school. But for this, some people say that time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted . I totally disagree with this statement. In this essay , the reason to support my disagreement with the statement will be explained in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost , learning on the Internet authorize us to access to vast resources. It provides students with a wealth of information that may not be available in traditional textbooks or school libraries. The Internet, which offers a wide range of resources that can enhance students' understanding of various subject namely online databases, academic journals, educational websites assist us in learning easily.
Furthermore, obviously , flexibility and personalized learning are also two of the main benefits of the Internet in general and studying on the Internet in particular. Online platforms often supply flexibility in terms of time and space of learning . Students that often have to use the Internat to study can approach study materials at their convenience and tailor their learning experience to their individual needs and preferences . Therefore, it enhances motivation and improve learning outcome.
In addition, time on the Internet specifically studying is not a wasted interval because of its advantages that we can not be denied.
- Children today are dependent on computers and electronic entertainment It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and joining in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors do you agree or disagree with this view 67
- Children today are dependent on computers and electronic entertainment It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and joining in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors do you agree or disagree with this view 89
- Children today are dependent on computers and electronic entertainment It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and joining in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors do you agree or disagree with this view 56
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue this is leading to negative consequences Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, in addition, in general, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41441441441 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06017900827 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599099099099 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6470676491 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.166666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222955366189 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813567481001 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080323867251 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135763211751 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638151310399 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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