It was predicted that people in the 21st century would have much more free time than in the past. To what extent has this prediction come true?
In the age of globalization and advanced technology, much of the work is done by modern-age gadgets and machines. People in earlier centuries use to believe that the advancement in the coming generations will lead them to extra time for their personal activities. However, this progress has made humans much more invested than ever.
Undeniably, new technologies have provided humans with easy and faster communications. Network companies have made communication easily available at the tips of the hand. For example, with the help of high-speed internet, people are able to do virtual meetings and web searches for various problems within seconds, leading to a relaxed and comfortable life. Nonetheless, such features have encouraged pupils to spend more hours online and communicating with friends across the globe.
On the other hand, it can not be neglected that even in the presence of those creations, people are getting very busy in their lives as people are becoming more career-oriented, so they do not want to sit free in their homes and everybody wants to be independent. As well as, another reason for the hectic schedule is rising prices, and due to that they are used to doing more work to satisfy their basic and luxury needs. That is why assumptions about free space in the twenty-first centenary are proved wrong from some points of view. Because, if they save their moments by using human-made machines then they have to work more to buy those devices and vehicles. To exemplify, now humans are accustomed to techniques such as air-conditioners, food processors, washing machines, and many other items. Consequently, people invest more time than ever before to earn enough to fulfill their new requirements.
To sum up, despite the convenient and comfortable of what advanced technology bring about human beings, it can be strongly affirmed that people in the modernization era have less leisure time rather than the previous generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, nonetheless, second, so, then, well, for example, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22151898734 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96570824806 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623417721519 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5531873706 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194239169286 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06474133256 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480085377289 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119217497869 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386750858538 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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