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While some people believe that when applying for a job, the salary is the most vital consideration, others claim it is not important. Personally, I do not completely agree with the view that the salary is the most vital factor.
On the one hand, it is not denied that most people only work to earn money, so the salary is the most dominant to choose a job. One reason is that a well-paid job will improve their standard of living and help them to buy a car, a house, jewelry, or anything which they want to own. Another reason is that the salary still decides their place in their company and society. For instance, if their salary is a million dollars per year, they are the millionaire and they will be respected by all people.
On the other hand, some people choose their job owing to the other factors whether the salary is not as well as other places. The first factor is the work environment. For example, the miner is a well-paid job but not many people choose it because its workplace is so extreme and dangerous. Instead of it, they choose an office job lighter. The second factor is the colleague and the owner. Definitely, no one wants to work with people who are unfriendly and unpleasant. In short, a high salary will come with a job that requires a lot of health and knowledge.
In conclusion, the salary is quite important to choose a job but I think that workers should balance between salary and the other factors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... health and knowledge. In conclusion, the salary is quite important to choose ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in short, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52873563218 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42519353622 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509578544061 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3449473917 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4285714286 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273733071028 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108777844228 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972700017918 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183468335245 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574568965467 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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