job elderly
Several individuals opine, the time at which the sexagenarians and older persons be admitted to have a vocation,a lot of troubles will be advented. I am not personally, in favour of the given statement. Firstly,what should be analysed about juveniles is they should not be kept as subordinates and under performers.In fact, according to their interpersonal abilities, they should be promoted in their job scope. A lot of career opportunities can be offered to them to give them the sense of accomplishment. All of the things which have been mentioned can be prepared better if elderly do not work. On the other hand,it can not be refuted that by virtue of the senile weakness and the dementia, the senile persons can not work but some of them who are healthy and can play a crucial role in job enrichment in the companies. it is better due to their proven competency and being overqualified by the great seniority, they be active as a career coach for guiding youngsters in the job routes and determine their job description according to their expertise. The older you are,the better social dignity you have, so aged people should be under the insurance coverage and be paid by adequate pension, moreover they should be well cared and having a job can protect them from solitude. Ultimately, not only the better facilities should have been provided for the aged people,but also the better job opportunities should have been provided for juveniles, but it is not too late and still they can be supported by governments budget allocated for them. At the moment at which I be old I will have been working to develop my country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, still, well, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83512544803 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88885776018 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52688172043 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.1795736528 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.9 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133136583515 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051345966547 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048637961298 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133136583515 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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