People should read only those books that are about real events, real people and established facts.
Are u agree or disagree?
some individuals are eager to purchase new tools such as cell-phones and computers.i personally, agree with being updated and keeping up with the technology. it cant be denied technology plays a key role in contemporary life I mean the more you immerse yourself in it the more you are aware of the global issues. the flow of the information is transferring fast among people. therefore who is not knowledgable about this matter can be considered as an illiterate person.alot of opportunities will be opened up by using new technology.i mean not only you can gain the information through it but also u can exhibit you can exhibit your abilities which can provide you with a lot of job opportunities.alot of companies enjoy these gadgets to advertise their productions so its the cornerstone of their corporation for earning money and promoting the level of their job. Although we are provided by a lot of proses which were mentioned there are some cons that should be considered. for instance sometimes buying these facilities can charge you and you will lavish your money for it instead of buying basic materials for your life.furthermore its possible that your privacy be invaded.children are being mandated with perilous information moreover solitude, sedentary lifestyle, obesity, having irregular sleeping pattern and a lot of personality disorders will be increased through using them among people. Ultimately it should be reiterated people should have been educated before using these gadgets and if people were informed this issue would be solved easily to conclude in my opinion the merits overweight the demerits.
- job elderly 56
- Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops.Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion. 56
- People should read only those books that are about real events, real people and established facts.Are u agree or disagree? 11
- People should read only those books that are about real events, real people and established facts.Are u agree or disagree? 11
- Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops.Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, i mean, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22988505747 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10885013062 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.648530002 49.4020404114 305% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.0 106.682146367 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2857142857 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8571428571 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0570795695174 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304200635413 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435073966415 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570795695174 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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