accident
The most impressive alternative for lessening the car smash is police action.Although I personally,totally agree with the given statement,still there are several factors which should be analysed. First of all I want to investigate about the roots of this crisis.there are numerous contributors to traffic accident for instance driving recklessly,over confidence of juvenile drivers,navigation errors,poor road condition and inadequate law and people's education. Secondly,I would like to introduce some measures which should have been taken earlier,although It's late and If they were enforced sooner,this issue would be solved quickly,still there are a lot of people who can be saved through it.The actions such as:redesign and reshaping roads,Equipping roads with facilities and in the critical cases,treating more harshly with delinquents and revoking their licenses can be practical. To conclude,I'm definitely in favour with the given idea but the details should be considered precisely unless It will be associated with alot of bad consequences and casualty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Although
...essening the car smash is police action.Although I personally,totally agree with the giv...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , totally
...h is police action.Although I personally,totally agree with the given statement,still th...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , still
...y,totally agree with the given statement,still there are several factors which should ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , over
...accident for instance driving recklessly,over confidence of juvenile drivers,navigati...
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Suggestion: , navigation
...ssly,over confidence of juvenile drivers,navigation errors,poor road condition and inadequa...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , poor
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...uate law and peoples education. Secondly,I would like to introduce some measures w...
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...res which should have been taken earlier,although Its late and If they were enforced soon...
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Suggestion: , still
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Equipping
...ons such as:redesign and reshaping roads,Equipping roads with facilities and in the critic...
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Suggestion: , treating
...ith facilities and in the critical cases,treating more harshly with delinquents and revok...
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...r licenses can be practical. To conclude,Im definitely in favour with the given ide...
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Suggestion: I'm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 154.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91558441558 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.7210681876 2.80592935109 133% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.74025974026 0.561755894193 132% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.420480393 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 227.75 106.682146367 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.5 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0491565558209 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327463557664 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567183519502 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0491565558209 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 13.0946893788 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 15.99 50.2224549098 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.65 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.16 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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